mahelgaens's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FGfanimation - Brian and Vinny behind the microphones]

Great animation, great voice yes, but I just don't get it.

[Black & White Test Animation]

testing animation with female char ? well I could say that is good work 5/5
and the intro shortclip it's really good I like it, can't wait for the real animation film
the movements it's fine honestly everything just fine for me good job

and last thing for me is LET'S START WATCHING!"

TerminatedAccount responds:

Thank you mahegaens. We aim to please.

[Mario Bullies]

5/5 nyet
nice graphic really even the movements still weird I guess you should make more and try to take advice or see Animation forum thread to make you get a lot of information. Don't worry about native language it's about quality I guess u can ask people for do the dubb (voice act) in the forums too

great job (taik bisa amet lu bikin ginian iri gua wkwkkw PEACE! )

FranziTwistedMind responds:

Hi Mahelgaens,

Thanks for your support and input :) yes i know that my cartoon is still weird in movement, dubbing, storytelling, etc.. It's seriously very far from perfect..but I seriously love doing animation, I hope I can learn more and more fo make better cartoons :D And oh yeah if you like, you can see and (ehm..) subscribe my youtube channel, there is more cartoons there, the link is somewhere on this video description above.

Like I said, I'm still a newbie and need to learn more.

[L F]

well I can tell it is good to see this animation even it's 2D the movements so smooth, overall it's a good work that you have done
I have some review that in the 0:52 second the guy that attacked by the lion: what's wrong with his hand ? it's better to see the hands just still or trying to cross his hand to act it's on guard
and at 1:55 what happen ? is it teleport ? or ?

well the thing is I like it good job

airman4 responds:

At 0'52 , nothing , hard to explain , the part of his hands is not seen cause the particlesof his forarms hide the arm (sorry for my english)

At 1'55 hahah i should not explain but it's not really a teleport more like a swallow XD
I should have turn the shield into a mouth maybe

[Adventures with Stickmen: The Camping Trip]

i like the idea but, well still need a lot of work for the smooth movements but I appreciate the hardwork, keep up